At the start I think the 'bubbles, might last a bit too long. You can still see them when the text appears. Some of the shots with green grass in them don't seem as bright as others (the shot where Max is sitting on the bench and Jak pops up behind him). I think you use this shot twice. Not sure about the timing at the end where we see 4, 6 then lots of people - they all last for a different length of time and might be better if they were all the same time and i think you need less of the first one but more of the last one....
At the start I think the 'bubbles, might last a bit too long. You can still see them when the text appears. Some of the shots with green grass in them don't seem as bright as others (the shot where Max is sitting on the bench and Jak pops up behind him). I think you use this shot twice. Not sure about the timing at the end where we see 4, 6 then lots of people - they all last for a different length of time and might be better if they were all the same time and i think you need less of the first one but more of the last one....
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