Thursday, 20 November 2014

Responding to Audience Feedback

I have been getting a lot of audience feedback over the past few days for my current music video to see how I can improve it. I have responded to a lot of the feedback my target audience gave me to make it as good as possible. 

When Alex watched my video and I recorded her response, she said that the teeth look a little creepy. A few other people also told me this, including Molly, who tweeted me feedback. Therefore, I have removed the colour alteration from the teeth to make them look slightly less scary!









Also, Gary gave me some feedback about the guitar instrumental. A lot of people said that it looked a little boring because not much happened during it. Gary suggested that I spiced it up a bit by adding cartoon blue notes coming out of the guitar. 






I gave this a go and it did work very nicely. However, some others said that the CUs of the mouths were a bit out of place, such as Cristina. 
This feedback certainly got me thinking about how I could make the mouths fit in nicely. And then I decided, why not spread the multicolour effect throughout the video? Consequently, I decided to make the musical notes coming out of the guitar multi-coloured. It looks great! The guitar solo looks more memorable and the teeth look slightly less out of place. Along with the rainbow I am beginning to integrate it in a bit better. 

Ellie and Molly loved the 'comical parts' and thought I should add more. Additionally, Cristina also suggested that I added more of the animation elements because she thought they looked good. 


I have therefore begun adding in more animations to the video to make it even more comical. My personal favourite new addition so far is the squirrel running up to an acorn and eating it!
I am still getting audience feedback whilst I make some changes and so I hope my video will keep on evolving!

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